Scenery Haiku

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😉This is my first Haiku. Haikus are Japanese poems with 5 syllables in the first line, 7 in the next one, and 5 again in the last one. I have never written a Haiku before, so don't expect it to be perfect.

So...............





Petals drifting by,

As the ocean rumbles close,

Like a dream.


Haikus normally don't have titles. But if I was to name it, I would name it "Nature's Dream"




 

Comments

  1. The Sub-DomainOctober 13, 2017 at 7:04 PM

    O I see
    I didn't know that before !
    Share more knowledge with us !
    Good haiku!😘

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  2. The Sub-DomainOctober 13, 2017 at 7:07 PM

    Thank you mama but please after every comment write mama so my readers can tell the difference!

    ReplyDelete

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