Song of the Sea (poem), I'll Keep Going (poem)

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Sorry for not posting here for about a month! I have two poems, and I decided to write 'em up here, because I would, right? Anyways, here you go..


Song of The Sea


The crashing waves
The rumbling ocean
The tide comes in
Song of the sea
How beautiful it might be
Like a bird chirping in the breeze
Or the rustling leaves
The humming of the ocean blue
Shining, glittering and sparkling too
Song of the sea
Like a buzzing bee
Or a shaking tree
Like raindrops splattering on the ground
Music like this is nowhere else to be found
Song of the sea




I'll Keep Going

I'll keep going on
I will never stop
Oh, just keep going, just keep going, never stop
Go straight for what you want
Be sure of yourself
Never doubt what you can do




Comments

  1. Zainab Salman SiddiquiNovember 14, 2018 at 10:36 AM

    Hmm, interesting! I like your first poem best, and as I love the sounds and smells and feels of the sea, I can totally relate to it. The words you have used, such as 'crashing', 'rumbling', 'humming', 'splattering', and 'buzzing' make me feel the sea, through my ears at least. I also agree with your second-last line; 'music like this is nowhere else to be found'. :D
    The second poem is also interesting and sort of inspiring. What's more, both of your poems are quite rhythmic and sonic in their sound, Masha Allah. Keep posting! :)

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