ocean wonders - tanka

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Hii! This is a poem I wrote for my English homework. Because tankas are really short, I'll be copying this down here.

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The roaring waves
crash against the shore, man
standing in awe.
The pebbles on the sand
feel spiky underfoot.

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  1. R.K.J. & LIFEMay 20, 2020 at 9:45 PM

    OH MY GUHD EVEN THOUGH ITS 1 STANZA LONG IT MAKES ME LITERALLY FEEL LIKE A MOVIE/288 PAGE STORY HONEST!

    YOU ALWAYS KNOW WHAT I NEED TO READ TO MAKE MY LIFE/DAY
    LOVE YOU AND ACHIEVE YOUR DREAMS
    -RIHAM

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    1. The Sub-DomainMay 22, 2020 at 12:48 PM

      riham honestly i am not j.k. rowling or lemony snicket or something

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    2. R.K.J. & LIFEJuly 11, 2020 at 6:24 PM

      well you act better bffs honer

      Delete

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